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Band 6+: How does technology affect the way people spend their leisure time?

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Well, let me think. I guess technology really has an impact on how people spend their leisure time. I think that technology helps people relax because it is related to phones and devices that provide interesting entertainment. It can be regarded as one of the best ways to feel calm and focused, whether watching videos on social media or speaking to artificial intelligence robots. They can ask for advice or just talk about their lives.

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Well, let me think. I guess technology really has an impact on people how they spend their leisure. I think the first I think that technology helps people to relax because technologies are related to the phones and devices which are which provides people and really interesting entertainment. And they can it can be regarded as one of the best ways to be calmed and focused on videos in social media or they can speak to artificial intelligence robots and also Ask for advice or just talk about their lives

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