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Band 6+: How does the internet affect culture?

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Actually, I'm sitting on the fence on that one because we have to admit that the introduction of the internet has enabled people to disclose information and share cultural content more effectively. For example, over the past decade, it has allowed music, religious, or national movies to be widespread, promoting cultural exchange. However, it is fair to talk about the adverse points of the internet because as youngsters access unfamiliar cultures, they become more curious, and whenever it happens, it can also lead to the loss of traditional values as people adopt global trends and lifestyles that influence them on online platforms.

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Actually, I’m sitting on the fence on that one because we have to admit that the introduction of internet have enabled people to disclose information and share cultural content more effectively. For example, over the past decade, it has allowed music, religious or national movies to be widespread with promote cultural exchange. However, it is fair to talk about the adverse point of internet because as the youngster access to unfamiliar cultures like they become more curious and whenever, it can also lead to the loss of traditional values as people adopt global trends and lifestyles which influence my online platforms.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 3

because: 2

internet: 2

people: 2

cultural: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer presents a balanced overview of the internet's impact on culture, acknowledging both positive and negative aspects. To improve, consider providing specific examples to support the claims and further developing the analysis of how cultural exchange and loss of traditional values occur. A more structured approach with clearer topic sentences would enhance clarity and coherence.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-structured with a clear introduction stating a neutral stance. The ideas are presented logically, transitioning smoothly between the positive and negative impacts of the internet on culture. Minor improvements could be made in the flow of the second half of the response. The phrase 'whenever it happens' is slightly awkward and could be replaced with a smoother transition.

Lexical Resource

The candidate uses a range of vocabulary effectively, including words like 'disclose,' 'widespread,' 'adverse,' and 'adopt.' While the vocabulary is mostly accurate and precise, some minor word choices could be improved for greater clarity and sophistication. For example, 'promote cultural exchange' could be more impactful with a stronger verb.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'as the youngster access to unfamiliar cultures like they become more curious' is grammatically incorrect. The candidate also uses some slightly informal language ('sitting on the fence'). While this is acceptable in conversational English, more formal language would be beneficial for a higher score. More complex grammatical structures could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider range.

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