Band 7+: How does the internet influence people?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response directly addresses the question with a well-considered perspective. It acknowledges the dual nature of the Internet's influence, discussing both its benefits and potential drawbacks. The answer is coherent and provides specific examples to support the points made.

The response is generally fluent and coherent. The ideas are presented logically, and cohesive devices like 'but' and 'when' are used appropriately. However, there are a few hesitations and minor self-corrections that slightly affect the flow. To improve, focus on practicing speaking more smoothly and reducing pauses.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'judiciously,' 'profoundly beneficial,' 'unproductive habits,' and 'binge-watching' demonstrate a good range. However, 'un-purposely' is not the correct word; 'aimlessly' would be more appropriate. To enhance lexical resource, continue to expand vocabulary and focus on using words accurately in context.

The grammatical range is good, with a mix of simple and complex sentences. There are a few minor errors, such as 'for our both job and studies,' which should be 'for both our jobs and studies.' Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but attention to detail is needed to eliminate these small errors. Practice using different sentence structures and review common grammatical errors.