Band 6+: How has technology changed the way criminals steal money, for example by withdrawing money from someone's account or using stolen credit cards?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response attempts to address the question but lacks depth and specific examples. The explanation is somewhat vague and could benefit from more concrete details about how technology facilitates different types of financial theft. To improve, consider providing more specific examples and elaborating on the mechanisms criminals use.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and self-corrections ('I don't know, in TikTok and Telegram accounts and that's why some, I would say, sieve can use it for so and still the money'). The response could benefit from more structured organization and smoother transitions between ideas. Try to avoid fillers like 'I would say' and 'so'. Practice speaking more fluently on similar topics to improve coherence.

The vocabulary is relatively basic. The word 'sieve' is not the correct word; 'thieves' would be more appropriate. Expanding your vocabulary related to technology and crime would enhance your ability to discuss this topic more effectively. Try to use more precise and varied vocabulary to express your ideas.

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'technology changed the way how we live today' (better: 'technology has changed the way we live today') and awkward phrasing ('can use it for so and still the money'). Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your sentence construction. Review basic grammar rules and practice constructing more complex sentences.