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Band 5+: How has technology changed the way we work?

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In the age of technology, people depend on technology too much in learning and working. On the one hand, I would like to talk about the change in learning. With technological development, people can study online without going to school. We can take part in a lot of international educational courses online to acquire knowledge. On the other hand, technology has also influenced working in the world.

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In the age of technology, people are depend on technology too much in learning and working. On the one hand, I would like to talk about the change in learning. When technology development, people can study online without go to school to study. We can take part in a lots of international educational course online to acquire your knowledge. On the other hand, technology is influenced to working also in the world.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

technology: 3

people: 2

learning: 2

working: 2

online: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and touches upon the impact of technology on both learning and working. However, it lacks detailed explanation and specific examples to fully illustrate the changes. Consider providing more concrete examples of how technology has transformed work practices and the overall impact on the workplace. Expanding on the points made with specific details will strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but the structure could be improved. There's a noticeable lack of smooth transitions between ideas. The speaker attempts to organize the information into two parts ('on the one hand' and 'on the other hand'), but the connection isn't fully developed. More sophisticated linking words and phrases would enhance fluency and coherence. The pacing is uneven.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'a lots of' and 'influenced to' show a lack of precision. While the speaker uses words related to technology and education, more precise and nuanced vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors. 'depend on technology too much' is grammatically correct but could be improved stylistically. 'without go to school' is incorrect; it should be 'without going to school'. 'a lots of' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of' or 'many'. 'acquire your knowledge' is slightly awkward; 'acquire knowledge' is sufficient. The sentence structure is simple and repetitive. More complex sentence structures and accurate grammar are needed for a higher score.

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