Band 7+: How has the Internet Change the way people live?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response adequately addresses the prompt by highlighting key impacts of the internet on daily life. To improve, consider providing specific examples to illustrate each point. Elaborating on the positive and negative aspects of these changes would further enhance the response.

The answer is well-structured and coherent. The slight hesitations ('uh') are minor and don't significantly detract from the fluency. Perhaps try to incorporate a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore', 'in addition to', 'moreover') to enhance the flow.

The vocabulary is appropriate and accurate. While the answer uses effective words like 'dramatically transformed' and 'interconnected,' incorporating more sophisticated synonyms and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the response. For example, instead of 'social connection,' consider 'fostering social interaction' or 'facilitating social networking'.

The grammar is largely accurate and the sentence structures are varied. The minor grammatical error ('Internet has dramatically transformed' should be 'The internet has dramatically transformed') is easily overlooked. To achieve a higher score, focus on using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses, naturally and accurately.