Band 5+: How has the rise of technology influenced the way we communicate in today's society?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks a broad perspective and in-depth analysis of technology's influence on communication. It focuses heavily on negative impacts and personal opinions rather than exploring the multifaceted ways technology has changed communication. Consider discussing various communication methods (email, social media, video conferencing) and their impact on both personal and professional communication. A more balanced approach, exploring both advantages and disadvantages, would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There's some repetition and self-correction. Improving sentence structure and using smoother transitions would enhance coherence. Practice speaking more naturally and confidently.

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The candidate uses some informal language ('bad influence', 'really easy'). Expanding vocabulary with more precise and nuanced terms would improve the score. Consider using synonyms for frequently used words.

Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and tense consistency. The candidate struggles with complex sentence structures. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and expanding the range of grammatical structures used. Practice using a variety of tenses correctly.