Band 6+: How has travel changed compared to the past?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points of comparison between past and present travel. However, the response could benefit from more detailed examples and a broader exploration of the changes brought about by technology. Consider discussing other aspects of travel, such as accommodation, communication while traveling, and the impact of globalization.

The answer is understandable and mostly coherent. However, there are some repetitions and hesitations that affect the fluency. The structure could be improved by using clearer transitions between ideas. For example, instead of 'But nowadays, we are more accessible to the transport', a more sophisticated phrase like 'In contrast, modern travel offers significantly improved accessibility' would enhance the coherence and sophistication.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'accessible to the transport' are not precise. More precise vocabulary would improve the score. Consider using words like 'convenient,' 'efficient,' or 'affordable' to describe modern transportation.

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'we were finding hard' (should be 'we found it hard'), and the repetition of 'book book it'. While the overall message is clear, more accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed for a higher score. Practice using more complex sentence structures and paying close attention to subject-verb agreement.