Band 5+: How has your mobile phone changed your life?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question, but it lacks detail and development. Consider providing specific examples of how your mobile phone has impacted different areas of your life, such as communication, work, or leisure activities. Elaborating on these examples would strengthen your response.

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There is some hesitation and repetition ("If I want to example"). More natural phrasing and smoother transitions would elevate the fluency.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve this aspect. For example, instead of 'change every aspect,' consider a more specific description of the impact.

There are some grammatical errors. The phrase "we have to live mobile phones" is grammatically incorrect. While the meaning is understandable, more accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed for a higher score. The final sentence is also quite simplistic.