Band 4+: How have families changed in recent years?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer attempts to address the question by mentioning changes in family size and reasons such as work or study. However, the response is somewhat unclear and lacks full development. The phrase 'I give the list when last time with Che, Related' is confusing and does not contribute to the answer. To improve, focus on providing a clear, general overview of how families have changed, such as shifts in structure, roles, or living arrangements, and avoid personal or unclear references.

The answer lacks coherence and logical flow. The speaker starts with a general statement but then introduces unclear phrases like 'They were getting nested' and 'I give the list when last time with Che, Related,' which disrupt understanding. There is no clear structure or use of cohesive devices. To improve, practice organizing ideas with clear topic sentences and linking words (e.g., 'firstly,' 'in contrast,' 'for example').

Vocabulary is limited and imprecise. Words like 'nested' and 'indebted' are used incorrectly (likely meant 'nuclear' and 'independence'). The phrase 'more away from work or study' is awkward. To improve, expand vocabulary related to family structures (e.g., 'nuclear families,' 'extended families,' 'dual-income households') and practice using words accurately in context.

Grammar is frequently inaccurate. 'They were getting nested' is ungrammatical, and 'more away' is incorrect (should be 'away more often' or 'further away'). The sentence 'This gives people more indebted' shows a verb-noun confusion. The ending is incoherent. To improve, focus on basic sentence structures, subject-verb agreement, and correct word forms. Practice forming simple, clear sentences before attempting complex ones.