Band 5+: How how does the modern technology changed hand craft industry.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but lacks depth and specific examples. It focuses more on general technological advancements and their impact on efficiency rather than specifically addressing how technology has changed the handcraft industry. Consider providing concrete examples of how technology, such as 3D printing or online marketing, has impacted the creation, distribution, or marketing of handcrafted goods.

The answer is understandable but lacks a clear structure and some coherence. There is some repetition and the ideas aren't smoothly connected. Improving the flow of ideas and using more sophisticated linking words would enhance fluency and coherence. For example, instead of simply stating points one after another, you could use transitions like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,' or 'Consequently'.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated or precise. Words like "easily" and "fast" are overused. Using more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to technology and the craft industry would improve this aspect. For example, instead of 'easily,' you could use words like 'conveniently' or 'efficiently.'

The grammar contains some errors, particularly in sentence structure and tense consistency. While the message is generally clear, more attention to grammatical accuracy is needed. For example, the sentence 'we can work all the work do less time' is grammatically incorrect. Focusing on sentence structure and using a wider range of grammatical structures would improve this score.