Band 5+: How important is technology in your daily life?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant information. The ideas are generally clear, but could benefit from more specific examples and a more organized structure to enhance clarity and coherence.

The response is somewhat hesitant and repetitive. The phrase 'So I will boost my creativity and I will give the answer' is unclear and disrupts the flow. There are noticeable pauses and self-corrections. To improve, try to organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking and avoid unnecessary repetition. Practice speaking more smoothly and connecting your ideas with appropriate linking words.

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. The phrase 'cannot be some sentence in the world' is grammatically incorrect and doesn't convey a clear meaning. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to technology and its impact on daily life. Focus on using more precise and descriptive words.

The response contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'Here at technology' should be 'Here, technology'. The sentence structure is simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Practice using different tenses and complex sentence constructions.