Band 6+: How many people are there in your immediate family

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response provides the accurate number of family members and clarifies the relationship between them. However, there is a slight inaccuracy in mentioning 'undeterred one of the family' and 'Towchild of the family.' It would be better to avoid such errors and provide a clearer response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is mostly coherent and organized, but there are some instances of repetition and self-correction ('my brothers, my 3 brothers'). To improve fluency, try to speak more smoothly without unnecessary repetitions.

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but there are some errors and awkward phrases like 'undeterred one of the family' and 'Towchild of the family.' Try to use more precise and idiomatic language to enhance your lexical resource.

There are some grammatical errors in the response, such as missing articles ('the') and incorrect phrasing ('undeterred one of the family'). Work on improving the accuracy of your grammar by practicing sentence structures and word choices.