Part 3

Band 6+: How might an increased focus on individual well-being impact society as a whole?

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By focusing on our health, such as physical and financial well-being, we can help others in similar circumstances. We can make donations or assist in paying medical expenses for others. With good financial and health status, we may even influence the government and create policies to help others using our resources.

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With focusing on our health such as healthy or financial we can help others who have that circumstance like we can do donation or such can help to paying medical tax to others and with good financial and health maybe we can be the government and make some policy to help others with our power.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

others: 3

health: 2

financial: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides relevant ideas. To further enhance the answer, consider elaborating on the potential societal impacts with more specific examples and broader perspectives.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. The ideas are generally connected, but the transitions could be smoother. Try to use more cohesive devices to link your ideas together more effectively. For example, using phrases like 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to' can help to build a more logical argument.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'such as healthy or financial' is a bit vague. Using more specific and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'help others,' you could use 'support vulnerable populations' or 'contribute to community welfare.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains some errors that occasionally impede understanding. For example, 'With focusing on our health' is not grammatically correct. The sentence structure is also quite simple. Try to incorporate a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences, to improve the accuracy and sophistication of your language.

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