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Band 5+: How might the increasing reliance on technology impact the development of interpersonal skills in young adults?

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Oh yes, it is a very big problem. In my opinion, it causes anger and nervousness because nowadays people depend on their smartphones, and this is a very bad action. This is increasing year by year. People forget communication, and they become very nervous and angry with each other. If they are not used to it, they will face illness or other issues.

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Oh yes, it is very big problem. In my opinion, it causes of angry and nervous because nowadays people depend on our smartphone and this is very bad action. This is increasing by year by. And people forget communication. And people very nervous and very angry with each other. If they are not used for they will be illness or other action.

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