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Band 5+: How might the increasing reliance on technology impact traditional forms of art and creativity?

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Increasing reliance on technology has impacted negatively, in my opinion, because there are a lot of artists from past years, like Picasso and others. But when I look at social media or the internet, it seems that NFT art created by people is selling for much more than traditional art. This impacts creativity, and creativity has decreased in this way. So that's... so I mean...

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Increasing relies on technology has impacted negatively in my opinion because there are There are a lot of artists past years, like any artist Picasso or such as like that. But nobody’s when I look at social media or internet, it happens, not it happens. NFT arts created by peoples and these NFTs sells, sells by these artists and people willing to pay much more than traditional art. So it’s impacts to creativity and the creativity was decreased in this way. So that’s… so I mean…

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Task Response

The response touches on the topic but lacks depth and clarity. The ideas are not fully developed, and the connection between technology and the decline in traditional art is not clearly explained. Consider providing more specific examples and elaborating on the reasoning to strengthen the argument.

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The answer demonstrates some coherence but is affected by hesitations and self-corrections ('it happens, not it happens,' 'So that's... so I mean...'). The organization of ideas is somewhat clear, but could be improved with more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. Try to minimize pauses and filler words to enhance fluency.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The use of 'such as like that' is redundant. Expanding your vocabulary and using more precise terms would improve your score. For example, instead of 'a lot of artists,' you could say 'many renowned artists.'

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