Band 6+: How much do you spend on perfumes

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant and sufficient. Consider expanding on why you prefer more expensive perfumes, perhaps discussing your preferences in scent profiles or the longevity of the fragrance. This would add depth and make the response more engaging. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. The only minor issue is the slightly unnatural phrasing of 'I spent...to buy them'. Consider rephrasing to 'I spend...on them' for a more natural flow. This is a very minor point, however.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Instead of 'cheap perfumes,' consider using more descriptive terms like 'inexpensive fragrances,' 'low-quality perfumes,' or 'budget perfumes,' depending on the intended meaning. The range of vocabulary is sufficient for the task, but more sophisticated choices would elevate the response.

Grammar is mostly accurate. The tense is slightly inconsistent ('spent' vs. habitual 'spend'). Using the present simple tense ('I spend') would be more accurate to reflect a habitual action. The sentence structure is simple but effective. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score further.