Band 5+: How much time do you usually spend on your phone each day?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and provides specific examples of phone usage, which shows elaboration. However, the phrase 'Julie Watching Rails' seems unclear and may be a misstatement. Consider clarifying or correcting that part. The response could be more natural by avoiding the phrase 'too much time' without quantifying it, and instead giving an approximate duration.

The answer has some hesitation and lacks smooth transitions. There is a slight lack of coherence in listing activities. To improve, use linking words like 'such as' or 'for instance' more naturally, and avoid run-on sentences.

Vocabulary is basic and repetitive ('too much time', 'bad habit'). Some phrases are unclear ('Julie Watching Rails', 'oil's preparation'). Expand vocabulary with more precise terms like 'excessive', 'browsing', 'professional networking', 'academic resources'.

Several grammatical errors: 'I usually searching' should be 'I usually search'; 'scrolling' should be 'scroll'; 'This is bad habit' missing article 'a'. Sentence structures are simple. Practice using a mix of tenses and complex sentences.