Band 6+: How much time do you usually spend on your phone each day?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant and provides some elaboration, but it does not directly specify the amount of time spent on the phone each day, which is a key part of the question. The response focuses more on the change in usage over time and current activities. To improve, explicitly state the daily duration (e.g., 'about two hours a day') and then describe what you do with it. Additionally, ensure the answer remains focused on the present time, as the question asks about 'each day'.

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow, with a clear structure: past habits, present focus, and a concluding opinion. However, there are some issues with fluency, such as the phrase 'I used to make contents through my phones' which mixes past and present tenses, and the final sentence 'I don't think using tone that much is necessary' is unclear and likely a slip. The answer could be improved by using clearer cohesive devices and avoiding abrupt shifts in time references.

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, with some good choices like 'totally centric to my career' and 'professionalism'. However, there are inaccuracies: 'centric' is not commonly used in this context (better: 'focused'), 'make contents' should be 'make content' (uncountable), and 'tone' is a mispronunciation or error for 'phone'. The range is limited, and more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. The tense usage is inconsistent: 'Since 2020 I bought my phone' should be 'Since 2020, I have had my phone' or 'I bought my phone in 2020'. 'I used to make contents through my phones' incorrectly uses past tense for a current habit; it should be 'I make content using my phone'. The final sentence 'I don't think using tone that much is necessary' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The range of structures is limited, with mostly simple and compound sentences. More complex structures and accurate tense usage are needed.