Band 6+: How often do you look at yourself in the mirror?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides sufficient detail. Consider structuring your response more directly to address the question of frequency. While the explanation is understandable, focusing on the 'how often' aspect more explicitly would improve clarity and coherence.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some noticeable hesitations and repetitions. The structure could be improved by using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of 'So I feel confident', a more sophisticated phrase like 'This boosts my confidence' could be used. The phrasing 'before I had to go to school or work' is repeated, which could be streamlined.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'appearance' and 'confident' are appropriately used, but more precise and varied vocabulary could enhance the response. Consider using synonyms for 'look' and 'check' to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

There are several grammatical errors. '2 years I often look' is grammatically incorrect. The tense is inconsistent; the sentence 'I need to look at myself in mirror to check my appearance' uses the present simple, while the following sentence shifts to the past tense. The sentence structure is also quite simple. More complex sentence structures and accurate tense usage would improve the score.