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Band 7+: immigration issues in pakistan

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Well, I think it's a very important question to discuss some of the major immigration issues that Pakistan is facing nowadays. The condition is deteriorating because of the declining economy of Pakistan, the lack of job opportunities, and the overall perception that we are not going to achieve a stable economy. This situation is forcing many students and other workers to leave Pakistan, which is really having a negative impact on our society.

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Well, I think it’s a very important question to discuss some of the major immigration issues that Pakistan is facing nowadays. I think the condition is very deteriorating I guess and because of the dying economy of Pakistan and lack of job opportunities and the overall concept that we are not going to get to the stable economy is forcing a lot of students and other workers to leave Pakistan and which is really having a bad impact on our society.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

pakistan: 3

economy: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The response directly addresses the prompt and presents a concise overview of the immigration issues in Pakistan. Consider expanding on the specific impacts of emigration on Pakistani society and providing examples to support your claims. Exploring the different types of immigration (e.g., emigration vs. immigration to Pakistan) would also enrich the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition ("I think") could be reduced. The phrasing 'dying economy' is a bit informal; 'declining economy' is a more suitable alternative. A more concise and impactful conclusion would improve the overall fluency.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. Words like "deteriorating" and "perception" show a good range. However, more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to describe the economic situation. Consider synonyms for 'bad impact' such as 'detrimental effect' or 'adverse consequences'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor issues. The sentence 'which is really having a bad impact on our society' could be improved by using a more sophisticated structure. For example, 'This exodus is having a detrimental effect on society' or 'This is having a significantly negative impact on our social fabric.' The use of 'is forcing a lot of students and other workers' is slightly less precise than 'is forcing many students and workers'.

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