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Band 6+: In what ways can education systems adapt to meet the changing needs of a globalized world?

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Maybe by defining systems for students. For example, students who excel in cognitive skills can directly enter a globalized world and contribute to society, while students who struggle with cognitive skills could be better prepared before joining in. Education will affect how they act and work in their society. Thank you.

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Maybe by defining systems for students, for example, students who are much better in cognitive skills can directly go to a globalized world, can join and write into the society, while the students who are not really well with their cognitive skills could be more prepared before joining in since education will affect how they will act, how they work in their society. Thank you.

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The response addresses the question but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, consider elaborating on the types of adaptations needed in education systems and providing concrete examples of how these adaptations can better prepare students for a globalized world. Focus on providing more detailed explanations and relevant examples to support your points.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Terms like 'cognitive skills' and 'globalized world' are used appropriately, but the range could be expanded. Try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to education and globalization.

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