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Band 6+: In what ways can schools better prepare students for the emotional challenges of adulthood?

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There are many ways that schools can better prepare students, most of the time for their emotional challenges. I think by creating sessions focused on this, in which we discuss how students can deal with difficult situations they encounter and not panic. In any situation, they should try to remain calm and tolerate anything difficult that happens to them. With the passage of time, they can achieve anything, but the first thing is to remain calm and composed.

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There are many ways that can school make a better school, most of the time for students. I think by trying to make a session for that, in which today I’m not talking about the student, how well they deal if there is any difficult situation they are seeing and like not panic in any situation, panic in any situation try to calm and tolerate anything you have any difficult happen on you and with the passage of time you can achieve anything but first thing you have great remain calm and coldness

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