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Band 6+: In what ways do you think globalization influences cultural identity, both positively and negatively?

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I suppose that negative outcomes are outweighing the positive aspects. Globalization creates a society that looks the same. If they are just copies of someone, I think it's frustrating. It influences their cultural identities and forces us to become someone we don't want to be. For instance, a trend comes up on social media, and everyone follows it. Meanwhile, they could just continue doing what they should as a society.

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I suppose that negative outcomes are over-weighting the positive forms. Globalization just creates a society that looks the same. If they’re just looking copies of someone, and I think it’s frustrating, It’s influences that they are cultural identities and it just forced us to became someone who we don’t want to be. For instance, a trend comes up in social media and everyone does that. Meanwhile, they could just continue doing what they should be as a society.

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The response addresses the question by discussing the influence of globalization on cultural identity, primarily focusing on negative aspects. To improve, consider providing a more balanced perspective by also discussing potential positive influences of globalization on cultural identity. Additionally, elaborating on the mechanisms through which globalization exerts its influence and providing more specific examples could strengthen the argument.

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