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Band 7+: In what ways might globalization change the traditional family structures in your country?

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I think it is about the mindset. In my traditional family, people usually got married when they were below 20 years old, but today in Indonesia, especially in my family, they do not consider that matter anymore. They prefer to let their children get married when they are ready. For example, it is mostly above 20 years old now. I think this is also the impact of globalization on the culture of marriage in Indonesia. Many people in Indonesia are currently aware that they have to be at least 21 years old for females to get married and 25 for males to get married so that they are ready to have a family.

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I think it is about the mindset and my traditional family, people usually got married when they are below 20 years old but today in Indonesia, especially in my family, they do not take that matters anymore. I mean they prefer to send their children to get married when they are ready. So for example it is mostly above 20 years old and I think this is also the impact of the globalization about the cultures of marriage in Indonesia. So many people in Indonesia currently already aware that they have to be at least 21 years old for the female to get married and 25 for the male to get married so that they were ready to have a family.

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years: 3

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think: 2

people: 2

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