Part 3

Band 6+: In your opinion, what are the most effective strategies for reducing social inequality in modern societies?

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

77% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

Well, this is a really good topic to talk about. We are living in India, and we know that our country struggles with this issue. Society tends to judge people based on their circumstances. I think those who have knowledge about this issue or want to address inequality should raise their voices and express their concerns about it. We should help others to think differently about inequality and work together to find solutions. It's important for everyone to contribute to this conversation and strive for a more equitable society.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Well, this is a really good topic to talk about. We are living in India and we know that our country is really bad about it. The society is really judgeable about the people who are judged by the common people of society. So I think people have to, we have to, the person who have knowledge about it or who want to stop the inequality within a society, they should ever raise their voice and express express that they are thinking about the bad thing about the inequality and we should help the person to think newly about it.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 36 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Vocabulary Repetition:

this: 4

about: 4

their: 3

issue: 2

society: 2

think: 2

inequality: 2

should: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question and provides relevant strategies for reducing inequality. The ideas are generally clear, but could benefit from further development and specific examples to enhance the depth of the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent but contains noticeable hesitations and self-corrections ('people have to, we have to'). The ideas are presented, but the organization could be improved for better clarity. To enhance coherence, try to structure your answer with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' 'however') to link your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The word 'judgeable' is not used correctly. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to inequality and social issues. For example, instead of 'bad,' you could use 'severe' or 'significant.' Instead of 'think newly,' consider 'reconsider' or 'adopt a fresh perspective.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are errors in sentence structure and word choice. For example, 'The society is really judgeable about the people who are judged by the common people of society' is awkward and grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your sentence construction. Practice using complex sentences and varied verb tenses.

Answers On The Same Topic:

In your opinion, what are the most effective strategies for reducing social inequality in modern societies?

I have not thought about it before but I really I strongly believe that But if most of the studies helps to reducing income inequality in our modern society, some areas. There are so many strategies for reducing income. They are income equality. They are Every jobs salary increase and government should be increased. employees […]

Band 5+

In your opinion, what are the most effective strategies for reducing social inequality in modern societies?

In my opinion, there are some most effective strategies for reducing social inequality. Like government and local authorities can arrange any function or any festival to reduce inequality in the society. Like they can arrange any sports competition between them, between many societies. Many people from many classes or many different status can participate in […]

Band 6+

In your opinion, what are the most effective strategies for reducing social inequality in modern societies?

It depends because the best strategies aren’t the same for old people. In my opinion, in my perspective, it’s necessary to ask people what they really want it. they really want sorry and take that as the point as a point to start making strategies for reducing income inequality however some strategies that are in […]

Band 6+

In your opinion, what are the most effective strategies for reducing social inequality in modern societies?

In my opinion, this is one of the major issues in all over the world. For example, most companies hire one who has a degree, not one who has a skill person. So I think balance is needed. Government should promote sustainable abilities, friendly, sustainable disabilities, friendly, so that a skilled person can get job […]

Band 6+

See All

4. What changes can individuals realistically make in their daily routines?

By getting the habits in every day or they can copy them from people, this kind of habits can make their daily routine and they can put the kind of alarm for them to do the time or they can just make sure to do the thing is in the part of the day or […]

Band 6+

1. Why do some people care about nature more than others?

Actually it depends on their character. Some people are more careful about nature because in their childhood they were taught how to protect nature environment. maybe they watch this kind of movies which are related to protecting the environment. That’s why their behavior becomes more tend to protect the environment and nature.

Band 7+

How should societies address the ethical challenges posed by advancements in artificial intelligence?

oh it’s a really hard topic I guess yeah it’s really hard topic for me to speak about it especially in English but I try my best to address it right so again about artificial intelligence we cannot we cannot deny it that it’s really affecting our the whole the society work here like it […]

Band 6+

How has the increasing reliance on technology affected traditional social interactions in your opinion?

I think as technology improves, people communicate less with others physically because a lot of us would rely on texting and living text messages and avoid taking calls because it’s more convenient and over time, we would prioritize talking on phones instead of meeting in person because we find it more effective however, I don’t […]

Band 7+

What role should education play in preparing young people for the future workforce?

Different kind of rules making young people for future workplaces because of education just like the discipline and the punctuation. Most of young people have the discipline for their work and also have the affection for the work work so they may be successful in their future and his work just like somebody is wanting […]

Band 6+

What are some innovative solutions for addressing overpopulation in urban areas?

In my opinion, I will suggest to everyone how to solve my solution could be address the growing problem of urban overcrowding and its excellent challenge. We can cancel the lot of upcoming works like preparing the buildings, high buildings and overpopulation and the overgrowth of that area and we can start the urban area […]

Band 5+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium