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Band 6+: In your opinion, what is the most effective way to address income inequality?

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So the main problem is not in quality; it is not cutting back on our spending while making money. In our society and community, there are not enough people who are able to achieve financial literacy because nowadays, a lot of people are busy with their work and chores, so they don't have time to learn something new or take advantage of new information. I mean, there is a lot of knowledge surrounding us nowadays, which is really necessary for our new lifestyle.

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So the main problem is being not in quality, is not cutting back on our spending during our making money. So actually in our society, in our community, there is no not enough people who are able to who are able to making financial literacy because nowadays a lot of people are busy doing their works and chores so they don’t have any time to learn something new one or to take advantage of something new one. I mean some informations like knowledges because surrounding us nowadays a lot of information and which is really necessary for our new lifestyle.

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