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Band 6+: In your opinion, what is the most effective way to address income inequality?

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As we know, in every country, there are many distinctions between the salaries of people, and this varies according to their job, how they work, or what they do. To address this difference in income, the government should consider implementing a kind of salary increase for every staff member. They can promote this through the office, and by implementing this way, they can address this issue.

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As we know in every country there are many distinguish between the salaries among people and it according to their job, how they work or what they work and to address this difference between the income the government should put maybe the kind of plus salary to every staff members and they can promote by the office or by the implement by this way they can address this issue

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