Band 7+: introduce yourself,from where you are

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is clear, concise, and directly answers the question. It provides relevant information about the speaker's background and future plans.

The response is generally coherent, but there are some minor pauses and hesitations. The use of 'After that' is a bit repetitive. Try to vary your cohesive devices to improve the flow. For example, you could use 'Subsequently' or 'Following that'.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Using more specific terms related to your field of study or future career aspirations would enhance the response. For example, instead of just saying 'look for my jobs,' you could mention the specific types of roles you're interested in. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. 'I am doing the master' should be 'I am doing a master's'. Also, 'study the PhD' should be 'study for a PhD'. Pay attention to articles and prepositions. Expanding the range of grammatical structures used would also improve the score.