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Band 5+: Let's move on to the topic of small businesses. How can a small business grow big?

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In my opinion, first, for example, if a small market grows to a huge market, it means that there's a good market. If they don't advertise their market, it's really a good thing that we can see a huge market. A small business starts to grow with advertising, so if the market is not available for advertisement, it means that it's really horrible for small businesses, and it's terrifying.

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In my opinion first, for example, a small market, if grows to the huge market, it means that there’s a good market, and if they don’t advertise their market, it’s really good thing that we can see huge market. Small business starts to grow with the advertising, so if the market is not available for advertisement, it means that it’s really horrible for small business, and it’s terrifying.

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that: 3

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks a clear and organized structure. It focuses on the importance of advertising but doesn't explore other crucial aspects of business growth, such as innovation, strategic planning, or effective management. Consider brainstorming a wider range of factors contributing to business expansion and structuring your response more logically.

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The answer is somewhat disjointed and lacks a clear, logical structure. There's repetition and some unclear connections between ideas. Work on creating a more coherent narrative with smoother transitions between points. Consider using clearer topic sentences to guide the listener.

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Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated or precise. The phrasing is sometimes awkward. Try to use more specific and impactful vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'horrible,' consider using words like 'challenging,' 'difficult,' or 'disadvantageous'.

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Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and article usage. While the message is mostly understandable, grammatical accuracy needs improvement. Focus on practicing sentence construction and mastering the use of articles (a, an, the). Pay attention to subject-verb agreement.

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