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Band 6+: Many animals are becoming extinct. Why is this happening?

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Unfortunately, it is true that many animals are becoming extinct. I'm not sure why this is happening, but I think one of the biggest reasons is the environment. The environment has been polluted because of bad factors like air pollution, water pollution, and many other things, and I think this is one of the biggest reasons behind this.

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Unfortunately, it is true that many animals are becoming extinct. I’m not sure why is it happening but I think one of the biggest reasons is the environment. The environment has polluted because of the bad things like the air pollution, the water pollution and many things and I think this is one of the biggest reason behind this.

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think: 2

biggest: 2

reasons: 2

environment: 2

pollution: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, provide more detailed explanations and concrete reasons for animal extinction beyond general pollution. Consider discussing habitat destruction, climate change, or overhunting to demonstrate a more comprehensive understanding of the issue.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('I think'). To improve, try to vary your sentence structure and use more sophisticated linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Practice speaking on similar topics to build confidence and reduce hesitation.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but somewhat limited. Words like 'polluted' and 'air pollution' are relevant, but the range could be expanded. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive vocabulary related to environmental issues and extinction. For example, use terms like 'habitat destruction,' 'deforestation,' or 'climate change' to show a broader understanding.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'why is it happening' instead of 'why this is happening.' While the overall meaning is clear, accuracy could be improved. Focus on practicing correct word order in complex sentences and reviewing common grammatical errors. Also, ensure correct tense usage when discussing past and present events.

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