Part 3

Band 5+: On what occasions do most people take photos

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If special events happen in our daily routine, most people tend to share them with others on social media. Additionally, if they want to highlight specific details of any event, they need to showcase them on social media because we are in a technological era. That's why people want to see more options, and they can access many types of social media. We can see the latest news on Instagram, WhatsApp, TikTok, and other social media platforms. Alternatively, if we want to share with others, we can post on our status on our mobile phones.

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If the special events happen in our daily routine and most of people tend to show to other kinds of the people in social medias but additionally just if we want if they wanted to show the some specific details of any events and they needed to show the on social medias because our period is technological period and that’s why the people wanted to see more options and they can enter this many sorts of the social medias. We can see just the last news on Instagram, WhatsApp, TikTok, on other kinds of the social medias and alternatively if we want to show us to show to other kinds of the people we can share on our stats of the mobile phone.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

social: 4

media: 4

they: 3

want: 3

people: 2

share: 2

others: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is somewhat relevant to the question but lacks depth and focus. It mentions social media extensively, which is only one aspect of photo-taking. Consider broadening the scope to include other common reasons for taking photos, such as capturing memories, documenting events, or expressing creativity. Try to provide more specific examples and avoid repetitive phrasing.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There is some repetition and self-correction. The ideas are presented in a somewhat disorganized manner. Work on connecting your ideas more smoothly and using transition words to improve coherence. Practice speaking at a more natural pace.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. There is some imprecise word choice (e.g., "kinds of people"). Expand your vocabulary and aim for more precise and nuanced language. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains several errors, including incorrect word order, tense inconsistencies, and preposition usage. While the message is generally understandable, grammatical accuracy needs significant improvement. Focus on practicing different grammatical structures and ensuring subject-verb agreement.

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