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Band 5+: On what occasions should people wear uniforms?

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Actually, people wear uniforms on many occasions, such as wedding events, birthday parties, and so on. People wear uniforms not only for these events but also for special days. For example, Idul Fitri and Idul Adha, etc. Moreover, when people travel, they wear uniforms.

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Actually people wear uniform their many occasions such as wedding events, birthday parties and so on. People wearing uniform not only these events but also special day occasions. And to give an example, Idul fitr and Idul aja etc. Moreover, how and people travel they wear uniform.

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