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Band 6+: Person who protects the environment

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So I'm going to describe a person whom I consider a protector of the environment: my biology teacher. She is very kind and polite, so every time we have a biology class at school, she always teaches us how to protect the environment in an easy way. Also, every time we have a conversation with her, she always tells us that after school we will organize a volunteer group that specializes in protecting the environment. When I was at the beach, I saw her gathering people to clean the beach. She organized volunteers to collect rubbish like cans, bottles, and also some kinds of paper.

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So I’m gonna describe a person whom I consider as a protector of the environment, is my biology teacher. She is very kind and polite, so every time when we have a biology class at school, she always teaches us how to protect the environment in an easy way. And also every time when we have a conversation with her, he always tells us after school we will organize a volunteer group who specializes in protecting the environment. And also when I was at the beach, I saw her collecting people to clean out the beach. So she ordered volunteers to collect rubbish like beans or bottles and also some kind of papers.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

biology: 2

every: 2

school: 2

always: 2

environment: 2

beach: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

6.5

The answer is good and covers the topic well. However, adding more details about the impact of the teacher's actions and expanding on the volunteer group's activities would strengthen the response. More specific examples of environmental protection methods taught in class would also be beneficial. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor hesitations and a slight grammatical error ("he always tells us" instead of "she always tells us") are present, but do not significantly detract from the overall fluency. Consider pausing slightly more between sentences for better pacing and clarity. The structure is logical and easy to follow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The use of words like "rubbish" is appropriate, but more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to enhance the response. For example, instead of "rubbish," consider using "litter" or "debris." Try to incorporate more precise and varied vocabulary to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. The pronoun error mentioned above should be corrected. While the sentence structures are generally correct, using more complex grammatical structures would improve the score. For example, instead of short, simple sentences, try combining some ideas into more complex sentences using conjunctions and relative clauses.

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