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Band 7+: Should children ask their teachers or parents for advice when making plans ?

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I personally believe that it is not a bad idea to rely on teachers or parents when it comes to planning. For example, teachers have more experience in educational matters, so kids can ask for their opinion on how to make an efficient study plan in order to get better marks. When it comes to life experiences, they can go to their parents because they are more well-rounded and can come up with better solutions to create plans for the future.

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I personally believe that it is not a bad idea to rely on teachers or parents when it comes to planning because, for example, teachers have better experience in educational cases so kids can ask their opinion about how to make an efficient study plan in order to get better marks And when it comes to life experiences, they can go to their parents because they are more well-rounded and they could come up with better solutions to draw up plans for the future.

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teachers: 2

parents: 2

comes: 2

their: 2

better: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response is relevant and provides clear reasons for seeking advice from teachers and parents. The answer could be improved by providing a wider range of examples and exploring the nuances of different planning scenarios.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and well-organized. The use of 'for example' and 'when it comes to' helps to structure the response. However, there could be more varied cohesive devices to enhance the flow. Try to use a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Terms like 'efficient study plan' and 'well-rounded' are used correctly. To improve, try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to planning and advice-seeking. For instance, instead of 'better solutions,' you could use 'more insightful strategies' or 'more comprehensive approaches.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures. There's a minor correction needed: 'more well-rounded and they could come up' should be 'more well-rounded and can come up'. Overall, the grammatical control is strong. Continue to focus on accuracy, especially in more complex sentence structures.

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