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Band 6+: Should everyone one a tram get the same prize money whe the win ?

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Yes, everyone in the team should get the same prize when they win because each player has contributed to the team and achieved a goal for the trophy, and each player makes their team and their fans happy.

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Yes, everyone in the team should get the same price when they win because each player I have contributed for the team and achieve a goal for trophy and each player makes happy for their team and their fans

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

team: 3

player: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is acceptable, but it could be improved by providing more balanced arguments and exploring different perspectives. Consider discussing potential drawbacks of equal prize distribution, such as the impact on individual motivation and performance. Expanding on the reasons for team success would also strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slight hesitation are present, but overall, the ideas flow logically. Improving the smoothness of delivery would enhance the score.

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The vocabulary is adequate and conveys the intended meaning. More precise and sophisticated vocabulary choices would improve the score. For example, instead of 'makes happy,' consider using 'brings joy to' or 'inspires pride in'.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence structure could be improved for greater clarity and impact. For example, 'each player I have contributed' should be 'each player has contributed'. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.

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