Today, a presentation will be about whether making sure students have a healthy lifestyle, be the responsibility of the parents or should it mainly be the responsibility of the schools. To begin with, many people think parents have a greater role in making the students maintaining a healthy lifestyle. As they have 24-7 looking over their children, they can prepare their healthy dishes every day. Also, parents have a much better understanding of their children’s mind and what they can love and what can make them prefer the healthy dishes rather than the fast foods. Moving to the next point, schools can also have a great part of responsibility for making the students have a better health plan. Learning industries can prepare some activities, competitions or even group projects that can encourage the students to adapt a new healthy lifestyle in a funny way and enjoy some memorable activities with their friends. To the last point, it is indispensable that a healthy lifestyle can have a great impact on students’ points that can affect their school marks and their school life. Scientists have proven that healthy minds exist in healthy bodies, which is of course a great port for students in schools. Having mentioned the above points, in my mind I believe both parents and schools share the responsibility of making the students have a healthy lifestyle.
Band 7+: Should makimg sure students have healthy lifestyle be the responsibility of schools or parents? Think about: Whether parents should be responsible for their health How schools can encourage good health Whether a healthy lifestyle has an impact on school life
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Today, the presentation will be about whether making sure students have a healthy lifestyle should be the responsibility of the parents or mainly the responsibility of the schools. To begin with, many people think parents have a greater role in helping students maintain a healthy lifestyle. As they are with their children 24/7, they can prepare healthy dishes every day. Also, parents have a much better understanding of their children's preferences and what they can love, which can make them prefer healthy dishes over fast food. Moving to the next point, schools can also play a significant role in helping students develop a better health plan. Educational institutions can prepare activities, competitions, or even group projects that encourage students to adopt a new healthy lifestyle in a fun way and enjoy memorable activities with their friends. Lastly, it is essential to note that a healthy lifestyle can greatly impact students' performance, affecting their grades and overall school life. Scientists have proven that healthy minds exist in healthy bodies, which is, of course, crucial for students in schools. Having mentioned the above points, I believe both parents and schools share the responsibility of ensuring students maintain a healthy lifestyle.
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