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Band 5+: talk about a person you want to work with. you should say: who the person is, how you know them, what they do and explain why you want to works with them

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I want to work with a person who is definitely my friend, my best friend from a very long time. Me and my best friend always plan to work together but destiny doesn't want it. After our graduation, she went to her master's program and I went to the job, so we both are on a different path. That's why we don't work together. Definitely we will. But she is always available for me whenever I have a doubt or any query. I would talk to her, and she always helps me.

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I want to work with a person who is definitely my friend, who is my best friend from a very long time. Me and my best friend always plan to work together but destiny doesn’t want it. After our graduation, she walks to the her master’s program and I went to the master’s I went to the job, so we both are on a different path. That’s why we don’t work together. Definitely we will. But she is always available for me whenever I have a doubt or any query. I would, I would talk to her, I talk to her and she always helps me, she always helps me.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

work: 3

friend: 3

always: 3

definitely: 2

together: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer addresses the topic by identifying the person (a best friend) and explaining why you want to work with her (because you have always planned to work together and she is supportive). However, it lacks specific details about who she is, how you know her, and what she does. The response is underdeveloped and does not fully elaborate on the required points. To improve, provide more information about her background, profession, and the reasons you admire her professionally. Also, include a specific example or experience that illustrates why you want to work with her. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent but lacks clear organization. The speaker jumps between ideas without a clear structure, and there is noticeable repetition and self-correction (e.g., 'I would, I would talk to her, I talk to her'). To improve, organize the response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, and use cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly. Practice speaking without unnecessary repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'always', 'work together', 'help'). There is limited range and precision. To improve, use more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'collaborate', 'supportive', 'reliable', 'aspiration', and 'professional synergy'. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'destiny doesn't want it' in favor of more formal expressions like 'circumstances have prevented us'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'she walks to the her master's program' should be 'she went to her master's program', and 'I went to the master's I went to the job' is confusing and incorrect. The sentence 'Me and my best friend' is informal and should be 'My best friend and I'. To improve, focus on using correct past tense forms, subject-verb agreement, and more complex sentence structures. Practice constructing clear and accurate sentences.

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