Band 6+: Tell me about your hobbies

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is a little brief and lacks detail. Consider expanding on the types of books you enjoy, the benefits you gain from reading, and perhaps how it impacts your life beyond academics. Adding specific examples would strengthen your answer.

The answer is coherent, but the phrasing could be improved for better flow. For example, instead of 'When I was free, I loved reading,' a more natural phrasing would be 'In my free time, I enjoy reading.' Minor repetition is present, but doesn't significantly detract from the overall fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. The phrase 'help throughout the academic and career' is slightly awkward. More precise vocabulary choices would elevate the response. Consider using synonyms for 'reading' and 'help' to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a minor error ('make me help' should be 'help me'). Sentence structures are simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures and varied grammatical forms would improve the score.