Band 5+: The effect of technology in our world

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is brief and somewhat repetitive. Try to expand on specific examples of technology's effects (positive and negative) and provide more detailed explanations. Consider structuring your response with a clear introduction, body paragraphs with supporting examples, and a conclusion.

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There is some repetition and the phrasing is a bit simple. Try to use more complex sentence structures and avoid unnecessary repetition. For example, instead of 'Technology has a big effect in our world. We can't live with technology,' you could say 'Technology has profoundly impacted our lives, to the point where it's become indispensable.'

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. While the words are understandable, more sophisticated vocabulary would elevate the response. For example, instead of 'bad way,' consider using 'irresponsibly' or 'destructively.' Try to incorporate more nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but the range of structures is limited. The sentences are quite simple. Try to incorporate more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or subordinate clauses, to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical abilities. The error in 'harmless' should be corrected to 'harmed'.