Band 6+: To what extent do social media platforms contribute to political polarization?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, elaborate on the mechanisms through which social media contributes to polarization and provide concrete instances of its impact on public discourse.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations. The ideas are presented, but the connection between them could be clearer. To improve, focus on structuring your answer more logically, perhaps by outlining the main points you want to make before you start speaking. Using cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'however,' 'in addition') can also help to link your ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. The phrase 'different way to fighting to political parties' is awkward. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of social media and politics. For example, instead of 'fighting,' you could use 'engaging in conflict' or 'polarizing debates.'

There are several grammatical errors in the response, such as incorrect verb forms ('social media influence' instead of 'influences,' 'some is also like in different way'). The sentence structure is also quite basic. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring that your sentences are grammatically correct. Practice using different tenses, clauses, and sentence types.