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Band 5+: To what extent does advertising influence people's perception of happiness?

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I can believe that advertising shapes our perception of happiness and success because if a person struggles to achieve success, they need advertising to shape their perception to enhance their struggles and support that.

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I can too much believe that advertising shapes our perception of happiness and success because if a person get more struggle of achieving success they need to advertising shape our for perspection to enhance their struggles and need to sport that.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

advertising: 2

perception: 2

success: 2

struggles: 2

their: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and sufficient explanation. To improve, provide more detailed examples and explore various aspects of how advertising influences perceptions of happiness and success. Consider discussing the specific techniques used in advertising and their potential impact on different demographics. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. The word choice is not always accurate (e.g., 'sport that'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to advertising, happiness, and success. Focus on learning synonyms and using more specific words to express your ideas.

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The grammar contains errors that affect clarity (e.g., 'get more struggle of achieving success,' 'advertising shape our for perspection'). The range of structures is limited. To improve, focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Practice using a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, complex) to express your ideas more effectively.

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