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Band 7+: Two successful in job essential.

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First things first, they should make a determination when they go into a business. Additionally, they should be patient before their business booms. If it is a large business with many staff, they need to recruit qualified members who know what is what and give whatever it takes by devoting all their energy and trying their best to stay updated and roll with the market punches.

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First thing first, they should make a determine when they go into a business. To add more, they should be patient before their business booms. If it is a huge business with a lot of staff, they are to recruit qualified members who know what is what and give whatever it takes through devoting all their energy and try their best so as to be updated to roll with the market punches.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 4

business: 3

their: 3

first: 2

should: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

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Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor issues with phrasing ('First thing first') and a slight stumble in the middle ('If it is a huge business...'). Improving the flow and using more sophisticated linking words would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'booms' and 'market punches' are effective. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to demonstrate a wider range. Consider replacing 'what is what' with a more formal equivalent.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors. 'make a determine' should be 'make a determination'. The phrasing 'give whatever it takes through devoting' is slightly awkward and could be improved. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.

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