Band 6+: What activities do you enjoy doing in your free time?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is quite repetitive and could benefit from more specific examples of books or outdoor activities. Try to show a wider range of interests and use more varied vocabulary.

The answer is coherent, but there's some repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing. The structure could be improved by using more sophisticated linking words and avoiding phrases like "First of all." Focus on smoother transitions between ideas.

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the answer conveys the intended meaning, using more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of 'outside activities,' use 'outdoor activities' or more specific examples like 'hiking' or 'cycling.'

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The phrasing 'I am the person who has more energy' is slightly awkward. More concise and natural phrasing would improve the grammatical range and accuracy. Consider using more complex sentence structures.