Band 4+: What are good hobbies and bad hobbies Why

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and specific examples. It touches upon the positive aspects of hobbies but doesn't fully address the prompt's request for examples of both good and bad hobbies and the reasons behind their classification. Consider providing concrete examples of hobbies and explaining why they are beneficial or detrimental.

The answer lacks coherence and organization. The ideas are presented in a disjointed manner, making it difficult to follow the train of thought. Work on structuring your response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Practice expressing your ideas in a more logical sequence. Avoid phrases like "I'm not sure" as they weaken your response.

The vocabulary used is adequate but not sophisticated. The phrasing is sometimes awkward ("engaging in enjoyable hobby, freely, faster"). Expand your vocabulary and practice using more precise and nuanced language to express your ideas effectively. Consider synonyms for words like "worsen" and "impact".

There are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies. The sentence structure is often clumsy and unclear. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and prepositional phrases. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.