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Band 6+: What are some potential drawbacks of the increasing globalization of culture and entertainment?

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The biggest drawback of globalization is the fact that the culture and entertainment industry is losing its unique perspective. Globalization takes away from sources where cultural roles may be ignored and changed. I think it's bad because, due to globalization, many cultures have lost their significance, and the entertainment industry has become crazier as people always need something new.

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The biggest rubbock of globalization is the fact that culture and entertainment industry is losing their unique view. Because globalization takes time and out of a source where cultural roles may be ignored and changed. I think it’s bad because of globalization, many of cultures ended their big being, live, and entertainment industry become more crazier because people always need something new.

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The response addresses the question by discussing the loss of unique cultural perspectives and the potential for cultural significance to diminish due to globalization. To improve, consider providing more specific examples or elaborating on the points made to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.

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