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Band 7+: What are some potential long-term social consequences of the growing emphasis on individual achievement in modern society?

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In my opinion, there can be some negative consequences. For example, individuals who are striving for achievement and recognition can forget about their dreams and passions. As a result, they may experience emotional burnout and lose sight of their natural goals, dreams, and passions.
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In my opinion there can be some negative consequences. For example individuals who are writing for achievement and recognition. You can forget about their dreams and passions. And after, they could feel emotional burnout. And they can forget about their natural goals, their dreams and passions.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:
their: 2
dreams: 2
passions: 2
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Pronunciation

6
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Task Response

7
The response addresses the question directly and provides a relevant consequence. To further enhance the answer, consider elaborating on the impact of emotional burnout or providing additional negative consequences associated with the emphasis on individual achievement.

Fluency & Coherence

7
The answer is generally coherent, but there's some repetition ('their dreams and passions') and a slight lack of flow. Using varied cohesive devices would improve the flow. For example, instead of repeating 'and', try using 'furthermore' or 'consequently'.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. 'Striving' is a better choice than 'writing' in this context. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
The grammar is mostly accurate, but there's a minor error ('writing' instead of 'striving'). Using a wider range of sentence structures would enhance the answer. For example, try using complex sentences to express cause-and-effect relationships more clearly.

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