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Band 7+: What are some potential long-term social consequences of the growing emphasis on individual achievement in modern society?

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I believe that there are a few consequences of the growing emphasis on individual achievement in modern society. To name a few, the first consequence might be the lack of commitment towards society, communities, and the environment. The second consequence might be the rise of interest in personal goods, which can hugely affect society. If we imagine this on a bigger scale, everyone would be interested solely in their own agendas and personal goods, which would lead to a disrupted community.

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I believe that there are a few consequences of the growing emphasis on individual achievement in modern day society. To name a few, the first consequence might be the lack of commitment towards society, communities as well as the environment. And the second consequence might be due to the rise of interest in personal goods only can affect hugely the society. Because if we imagine this on a bigger scale, everyone would be interested solely on their agendas, personal goods which will lead to a disrupted community.

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society: 3

consequence: 2

might: 2

personal: 2

goods: 2

which: 2

would: 2

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