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Band 6+: What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a society that increasingly values individualism over collectivism?

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Yes, I totally agree on that. There are many disadvantages to this because I think this society involves more stress, mental issues, and physical issues. It lacks sociability, and people become more overwhelmed and introverted. Everyone is individualistic and doesn't care about their family or friends, just my opinion.

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Yes, I totally agree on that. There are many disadvantages on this thing because I think this society involved with more stress and mental issue and physical issue. Let society like sociability and people become more overwhelming and introvert and everyone be and they’re individualistic and don’t care to his family or friend adjust my opinion

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