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Band 5+: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society?

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But to be honest, the potential benefits and drawbacks of living in a multicultural society are very significant. In Vietnam, having many multicultural societies can lead to local unrest. Many students can connect with others in the community or locally. This is evident in social media. On the other hand, one major downside is that there can be a lot of conflict. Because...

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But to be honest, the potential, benefits and drawback of living in the multicultural society is very happening. So like in Vietnam, having many multicultural societies is in the local unrest. have many students can understand with council in the Andres or local. So and this is learning social media in social media and in other other hand. But on the one most over side is have a very raw bike. Because…

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